Baby, You're Long Gone

Only 4 Chapters as of writing, Very sad start to the story; seems like our MC is in for alot of PTSD in his future, but the story is well written and the Quality is above average. Though alot more is needed to see how this world will run and operate. But it's a good start to a story that leaves alot to be desired in future chapters. Keep it up Author

Shameless author here (again).I think having written 100k words gives me the right to come here and do another review and answer some questions.I'm writing chapter 72 as I write this review and I have to say that the quality of my writing has improved a lot, mainly due to the amount of content I've read since I wrote the first chapter. Below I'll answer a few questions and tell you whether this novel is worth reading or not "Does this webnovel have harem?" No. I have nothing against harem, I've even written novels with harem, but Su Login's personality is more suited to a monogamous relationship."So is there romance?" Yes. Many people might be afraid of that, but the romance here is something more discreet and I'm developing it little by little."Does Su Login hate swords?" I've seen a lot of those comments. Some people hate sword users, others love them, so I'll tell you what is explained throughout the story: Su Login's spice is long-range weapons. He doesn't hate swords, but he prefers weapons like spears."Why is there some confusing information in the first few chapters?" Well, I published the first chapters and spent 10 months without writing due to lack of time, and when I got back to writing I ended up forgetting some small details (hehe). It's nothing too serious or that interferes with the reader's experience, but I'll do a revision to improve it."So, Is this novel worth reading?" Yes! Of course it is! Go ahedad and enjoy the story!

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